Jim Faircloth
Around The Corner
Published by Jim FairclothPublished on 20-May-12
This is a MIDI import from a tune I wrote a few years ago ... I used it as a "test bed" to get familiar with Songtrix. Let me know what you think ... but don't be too harsh on and old man !!
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Wallace L. Manker
Nice
slomem
Jim from one old man to another you did a great job. your breaks were on, as well as the syncopated drum injections> ( injections: for lack of a better musical definition) I liked it. Would of liked to have heard more drums. But less is always better than too much. 3.5 stars
Good Luck
Ernie Souchak
I like your ear - the cords sound and move well.
Kirsten V.
Harsh on an old man??? No way! I listened to your song with huge pleasure. Thank you.
Paul Baxter
I really liked some of your percussion bits in there. I stink at writing drum parts so far. Enjoyed the song overall. Sounds like some of the transitions between the sections could be a little smoother--maybe put some crescendos and decrescendos in the transitions?
Enva
First half poor, second half very good.
Jack Handley
I just started studying music theory (at 80!) and enjoyed seeing the structures.
André Uhres
I suggest that you give a little more suspense to melodies by variyng the top notes. Here is an example:
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